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Did I say it right??

Namaste, Mera naam Brandi hoon. Main padh rahi Hindi hoon.

Namaste !

Mera naam Brandi hai. Main Hindi padh rahi hun.

Brandi, You Said Right !!!!!! :)

Namaste, Mera Naam Brandi hoon Hain .

Main padh rahi Hindi hoon .   (Main Hindi Padh Rahi Hoon).

"Keep It Up"

Dhanyawaad... !!!!!

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Namaste, Mera naam Brandi hoon. Main padh rahi Hindi hoon.

It should be like this ... 

Namaste, Mera naam Brandi hoon hai. Main padh rahi Hindi hoon hindi padh rahi hun.

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Namaste, Mera naam Brandi hoon hai. Main padh rahi Hindi hoon.

main takes up hoon as ending in present tense. not the other forms.

if u say 'i am xyz', then it is 'main xyz hoon'

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Namaste, Mera naam Brandi hoon. Main padh rahi Hindi hoon.

I think it should be like this.

mera naam Brandi hai.mai hindi padh rahi hun.

In english the word order is subject verb object but here the order is subject object and verb.

A native speaker will help you more :)