שלום!!

mostly correct. only mistake is "ואני רוצה שאתם עוזרים לי"

the correct phrasing would be: ואני רוצה שתעזרו לי.
תעזרו is in the future tense - "you (plural) will help"

alternate phrasings:
אני רוצה עזרה - indirect, "i want help "

אשמח לעזרה (מכם) - polite, less emphatic "i'd like some help (from you)"

TV is usually spelled טלויזיה, though both spellings are correct - as is often the case with foreign words: טורקיה and תורכיה are both valid.