main aur mere life.

main aur mere(meri) life.

mera naam shamu hai aur mai malaysia se hoon. main ek mechanical engineering ( ki ) student hoon. mere pas zaada accha ( acchey ) dost nahi hai. kyu ki ( kyon ki ) woh sab mujhe use ( prayog/ isstemal .... meaning of 'use' in hindi ) karna jati ( chahatein hain )bus. lakhin ( lekin ) main tho ( to ) bohut ( bahut ) strong hearted hoon.yeh zindagi bohut ajib hai. 

Well I must say Your Hindi is Really awesome and "near"perfect. If you don't mind me asking Are you of indian origin? Just curious :)

Well nothing much for me to correct

main aur mere life.

mera naam shamu hai aur mai malaysia se hoon.main ek mechanical engineering student hoon. mere pas zyaada acchey dost nahi hain. kyu ki woh sab mujhe use karna chaahtein hain (Well that's sad !!, Well if they use you they are not freuinds at all if you ask me. I pray you meet worthy people :)) ,bus. lekin, main to (You can also skip "to" here) bohut strong hearted hoon.yeh zindagi bohut ajib hai.