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Here are a few minor changes I would make.
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I have nothing to say; this makes me remember when my brother was young, his teacher set a homework assignment of writing a little composition. He wrote; "Today I learned a song, the lyric is like this......"; and, he wrote down all the lyrics. He ended with; "I like this song very much." The thing is, he got a "A". His teacher's comment was: good song.
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