Today:24/01/2013
But the pain had disappeared unawares.
The time of lunch came!
I went to Italian restaurant with coworkers.
I had so big salad and pizza!
Fresh tomato of pizza were very delicious. :)
I'm stuffed!!!!

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Today:24/01/2013
On This morning, I had a little pain in the my belly.
But the pain has disappeared unawares mysteriously.
The time of Lunchtime came!
I went to an Italian restaurant with my coworkers.
I had so a really big salad and pizza!
(Fresh tomatoes of on pizza/Pizza with fresh tomatoes) were is very delicious. :)
I'm stuffed!!!!
Today:24/01/2013
On this morning, I had a little pain in the belly. I had a pain in the belly this morning.
But the pain had disappeared unawares. It has now disappeared.
The time of lunch came! At lunchtime I went to an Italian Restaurant with co-workers.
I went to Italian restaurant with coworkers.
I had so big salad and pizza! The salad and pizza I ate was so big!
Fresh tomato of pizza were very delicious. :) The fresh tomato on the pizza was very delicious.
I'm stuffed!!!!
( Yesterday I went to an Italian restaurant with my co-workers. I ate a big salad and pizza. The fresh tomatoes were very delicious. My belly was stuffed from so much food. This morning I awoke with stomach pains but they have now subsided.)
Great work and sounds OISHI!! Enough about food please you are making me very hungry :-)
Today:24/01/2013
On this morning, I had a little pain in themy belly.
But the pain hadhas disappeared unawares.
The time of lunch came! (this sentence is ok but maybe "My lunch time came.")
I went to an Italian restaurant with coworkers.
I had so a very big salad and pizza!
The fresh tomato of on the pizza were was very delicious. :)
I'm stuffed!!!!
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