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Today:24/01/2013

On this morning, I had a little pain in the belly.
But the pain had disappeared unawares.

The time of lunch came!
I went to Italian restaurant with coworkers.

I had so big salad and pizza!
Fresh tomato of pizza were very delicious. :)

I'm stuffed!!!!

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    Today:24/01/2013

    On This morning, I had a little pain in the my belly.
    But the pain has disappeared unawares mysteriously.

    The time of Lunchtime came!
    I went to an Italian restaurant with my coworkers.

    I had so a really big salad and pizza!
    (Fresh tomatoes of on pizza/Pizza with fresh tomatoes) were is very delicious. :)

    I'm stuffed!!!!

    Today:24/01/2013

    On this morning, I had a little pain in the belly. I had a pain in the belly this morning.
    But the pain had disappeared unawares. It has now disappeared.

    The time of lunch came! At lunchtime I went to an Italian Restaurant with co-workers.
    I went to Italian restaurant with coworkers.

    I had so big salad and pizza! The salad and pizza I ate was so big!
    Fresh tomato of pizza were very delicious. :) The fresh tomato on the pizza was very delicious. 

    I'm stuffed!!!!

    ( Yesterday I went to an Italian restaurant with my co-workers. I ate a big salad and pizza. The fresh tomatoes were very delicious. My belly was stuffed from so much food. This morning I awoke with stomach pains but they have now subsided.)

     

    Great work and sounds OISHI!! Enough about food please you are making me very hungry :-)

    Today:24/01/2013

    On this morning, I had a little pain in themy belly.
    But the pain hadhas disappeared unawares.

    The time of lunch came! (this sentence is ok but maybe "My lunch time came.")
    I went to an Italian restaurant with coworkers.

    I had so a very big salad and pizza!
    The fresh tomato of on the pizza were was very delicious. :)

    I'm stuffed!!!!

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