First notebook entry: Introducing myself

First notebook entry: Introducing myself

My brother's marriage ceremony.

I feel very sad that I cannot see my brother's marriage ceremony. I am feeling very regretful, because I want to see all of the marriage ceremonies' of my brothers and sisters. I had made a promise to myself that I would see all of their marriages, but I can not. We must keep to the house and we go to school. I think it might have been their relationship in Likas. It's very sad ..... I thought my brother would marry in 12 months .. Although, it seems that he will not be able to come as well, because he might also marry in Kuala Lumpur .. So, it's not only me that will not be able to see my eldest brother's marriage.

Ok, I'm off to start watching videos.. bye .. see you soon .. heee ... 

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You don't need to post this. It's not needed.

It was difficult trying to correct this notebook. You need to explain which brother you are talking about, because it seems that you have many siblings(brothers and sisters) and I don't know which brother you were talking about. 

For example you can use Brother 1 did...../ Brother 2 also.....

I wasn't very sure what you were meaning to say, but I did try my best.

Good Luck! ;D