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First notebook entry: Introducing myself

I am learning English, because i want to study medicin and i dream with will live in the United State at the future
Mi native language is Spanish, and i grew up in Colombia.
I enjoy to read, listening music and pray

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    First notebook entry: Introducing myself

    I am learning/studying English, because I want to study medicine and I dream with that I will live in the United States in at the future
    My native language is Spanish, and I grew up in Colombia.
    I enjoy to reading, listening to music, and prayers (this is ambiguous - does it mean listening to prayers, or praying?)

    First notebook entry: Introducing myself.

    I am learning English because I want to study medicine, and because I dream to live in the United States in the future.
    My native language is Spanish, and I grew up in Colombia.
    I enjoy reading, listening to music, and praying.

     

    First notebook entry: Introducing myself

    I am learning English, because i want to study medicine and I dream with will live of living in the United State at in the future
    My native language is Spanish, and I grew up in Colombia.
    I enjoy to reading, listening to music and prayer

     

     

     

     

     

    Prepositions and Gerunds and Capital 'I' seem to be the problems.  The meaning and intent is quite clear, however

    First notebook entry: Introducing myself

    I am learning English because I want to study medicine and I dream with that I will live in the United States at in the future
    Mi My native language is Spanish, and I grew up in Colombia.
    I enjoy reading, listening to music and praying.

    First notebook entry: Introducing myself

    I am learning English because I want to study medicine, and because I dream to live in the United States in the future.
    My native language is Spanish, and I grew up in Colombia.
    I enjoy reading, listening to music, and praying.

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