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I'm learning english to travel around the world

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    First notebook entry: Introducing myself

    I'm learning English to travel (around) the world

    First notebook entry: Introducing myself

    I'm learning english to travel around the world

     

    Grammatically your sentence is correct.  I feel that it is somewhat vague in what it is telling the reader.  Does a person need english to travel around the world?  Certainly to do so a person would require money and a means of transport.

    Consider:  I'm learning english so that when I travel around the world I will be able to communicate with a greater number of people.  {This sentence shows the connection between the learning of english and the world travel.}

     

    I hope this helps.

     

    Well done.

     

    Kind regards

    Patrick

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