First notebook entry: Introducing myself
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First notebook entry: Introducing myself
I'm learning english to travel around the world
Grammatically your sentence is correct. I feel that it is somewhat vague in what it is telling the reader. Does a person need english to travel around the world? Certainly to do so a person would require money and a means of transport.
Consider: I'm learning english so that when I travel around the world I will be able to communicate with a greater number of people. {This sentence shows the connection between the learning of english and the world travel.}
I hope this helps.
Well done.
Kind regards
Patrick
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