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About the Death

I don’t want to die now.
The reason is that,
I need more time to reading, study ,adventure and experience.
I want to see the time,
When I become the ideal me.
Mother would be sad if I were die, she gives me the best as possible as she can.
On the another side,
The death is not horrible at all.
Just like last year,
I have got lots of rosy memory.
sweet and bitter. Tear and smile. happiness and nightmare.
That’s all. Thanks for meeting you, take care of yourself.
The death, before it’s coming, I want to make myself be a rainbow.

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    About the Death

    I don’t want to die now.
    The reason is that,
    I need more time to reading, study ,adventure and experience. (I need more time to read, study, have adventures, and experiences.)
    I want to see the time,
    When I become the ideal me.
    My Mother would be sad if I were to die, she gives me the best as she possible as she can. (My mother would be sad if I were to die, she gives me the best that she possible can.)
    On the another side, (On the other hand.)
    The death is not horrible at all.
    Just like last year,
    I have got lots of rosy memoriesy.
    sweet and bitter. Tears and smiles. happiness and nightmares.
    That’s all. Thanks for meeting you, take care of yourself.
    The death, before it’s coming, I want to make myself be a rainbow.

     

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    About the Death

    I don’t want to die now.
    The reason is that,
    I need more time to for reading, studying ,adventures and would like to experience it.
    I want to see the time,
    When I become the ideal me one.
    Mother would be sad if I were dies, she gives me the best as possible as she can.
    On the another side,
    The death is not horrible at all.
    Just like last year,
    I have got lots of rosy memory.
    sweet and bitter. Tear and smile. happiness and nightmare.
    That’s all. Thanks for meeting you, take care of yourself.
    The death, before it’s will comeing, I want to make myself be a rainbow.

     

    About the Death

    I don’t want to die now.
    The reason is that,
    I need more time to reading, studying , living adventure and experience.
    I want to see my time passing,
    Till I will become the ideal me.
    My mother would be sad if I were die, she gives me the best as possible as she can.
    By another side,

    Death is not horrible at all.
    Just like last year,
    I have got lots of rosy memories.
    Sweet and bitter memories. Tears and smiles. happiness and nightmare.
    That’s all. Thanks for meeting you, take care of yourself.
    Before death comes, I want to make myself like a rainbow.

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