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the last few days in this company

About a month ago,i queted my job from this company ,as an accountant.The reason of this action is not so complecated.One point is that the company i work for located far away from my home.The other point is that, I don't want to continute my job as an accountant.
Today,I'm busy cleanning up my job here ,and pass it to my collegue .However,some of my collegues,seem to be not so friendly to me and my decision.It depressed me a little.
That's what I've experienced today.

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    the last few days in this company

    About a month ago,i queted my job from this company ,as an accountant.The reason of this action is not so complecated.One point is that the company i work for located far away from my home.The other point is that, I don't want to continute my job as an accountant.
    Today,I'm busy cleanning up my job here ,and pass it to my collegue .However,some of my collegues,seem to be not so friendly to me and my decision.It depressed me a little.
    That's what I've experienced today.

     

    Hi Larita,


    The corrections that are fairly easy to make are the punctuation and capitalization errors.  (1) Be sure to always place the commas and periods after the last letter they follow.  (2) A space must always follow a punctuation mark. (3) I - must always be capitalized.  Also, the first word of a title should be capitalized.


    The last few days in this company

    About a month ago, I quit my job as an accountant in this company. The reasons for this action were not so complicated. First, the company I worked for was located far away from my home. The second reason was that I didn't want to continue working as an accountant. 

    Today, I'm busy cleaning up my job here, and passing it on to my collegue. However, some of my collegues seem to be a bit unfriendly towards me and my decision. It depresses me a little. 
    That's what I've experienced today.

     

    That was really well done!  I understood what you were trying to say which is most important.  Keep studying!  

     



     

    The Last Few Days in This Company

    About a month ago,i quit my job at this company as an accountant.The reason for this action is not so complicated.One point is that the company I work for is located far away from my home.The other point is that I don't want to continue my job as an accountant.
    Today,I'm busy cleanning up my area here and passing it to my colleague .However,some of my collegues seem to be not so friendly to me and my decision.It depressed me a little.
    That's what I've experienced today.

    The Last Few Days In This Company

    About a month ago,i quit my job at this company ,as an accountant.The reason for this action is not so complicated.One point is that the company I work for is located far away from my home.The other point is that, I don't want to continute my job as an accountant.
    Today,I'm busy cleanning up my area here ,and passing it to my colleague .However,some of my colleagues,seem to be not so friendly to me and my decision.It depressed me a little.
    That's what I've experienced today.

    The Last Few Days in This Company

    About a month agoI quit my job with this company as an accountantThe reason for this action is not so complicatedOne point is that the company I work for is located far away from my homeThe other point is that I don't want to continue my job as an accountant.
    TodayI'm busy cleaning up my job here and passing it to my colleagueHoweversome of my colleagues seem to be not so friendly to me and my decisionIt depressed me a little.
    That's what I've experienced today.

     

    I corrected a few errors in punctuation spacingspellingcapitalization and verb tense. Otherwise, this is well written.

    The last few days in this company

    About a month ago, I quit my job from at this company as an accountant. The reason of this action is not so complicated. One point is that the company I work for is located far away from my home. The other point is that I don't want to continue my job as an accountant.
    Today, I'm busy cleaning up my job area here and passing it to my colleague. However,some of my colleagues seem to be not so friendly to me and my decision. It depressed me a little.
    That's what I've experienced today.

     

    [Good work.  The past tense of 'quit' is 'quit' (I know, it doesn't make sense).  Also, capitalize 'I' (我) and put a space after periods and commas.  Good luck finding another job.]

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