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你好!我傢有五口人。媽媽,爸爸,妹妹,弟弟,和我。我媽媽是醫生。今年我復習中文漢字。我寫漢字很慢。

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    About me (written in Chinese (traditional characters))

    你好!我傢有五口人妈妈,爸爸,妹妹,弟弟,和我。我媽媽是一名醫生。今年我復習学习中文漢字。我寫漢字的速度很慢。

     

    Good job!Keep up the good work!=)

    About me (written in Chinese (traditional characters))

    你好!我家有五個人。媽媽,爸爸,妹妹,弟弟,和我。我媽媽是醫生。今年我學習中文漢字。我寫漢字很慢。

    大家好!
    我有勇氣找一個非常好語言伙伴。 如果妳厲害,中文行的話,又有耐心,同時也要學會英文, 就傳 (fetch)我吧! 我很快搬家去武漢工作在楓葉學校--心情非常興奮!
    我想完成漢語視頻考試, 不知你們可以幫助我嗎? 非常感謝你們的熱心和耐心! =D 謝謝!

    Hello everyone!
    I have the courage to find a very good language partner. ! If you badly, Chinese line, then another patient, but also to learn English, to pass (fetch) me, I quickly moved to Wuhan to work at Maple Leaf School - the mood is very excited!
    I would like to complete the Chinese video test, I wonder if you can help me? Thank you very much zeal and patience! = D Thank you!

     

    大家好!
    我有勇气找一个非常好语言伙伴。如果妳厉害,中文行的话,又有耐心,同时也要学会英文, 就传(fetch)我吧! 我很快搬家去武汉工作在枫叶学校--心情非常兴奋!
    我想完成汉语视频考试, 不知你们可以帮助我吗?非常感谢你们的热心和耐心! =D 谢谢!

    About me (written in Chinese (traditional characters))

    你好!我傢有五个人。媽媽,爸爸,妹妹,弟弟,和我。我媽媽是醫生。今年我会復習中文漢字。我寫漢字很慢。

    About me (written in Chinese (traditional characters))

    你好!我有五人。媽媽爸爸妹妹弟弟我。我媽媽是醫生。我今年學習漢字,我寫漢字很慢。

     

    Hi I think this is better!

     

    when we want to say a series of members or things  we will use "、"between two words in Chinese.

    And between last one and last second one you can use "和"or"以及".its same!

     

    五"口"人: I think "口" is more formal but "個" is more oral speaking. 

     

    今年我:its not wrong But it sounds weird! So "我今年" is better!

     

    And when we talk about "漢字"you don't have to say "中文"because 漢字 is Chinese word so you don't have to say  that , it sounds weird too.

     

    i hope you can understand my poor English describe!

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