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如何成为一个男人

今天早上我读一个漫画书。这个书的名字是《如何成为一个男人》。有一个十七年的女人。她比她的男朋友大七岁。她男友还是个小学生。

作者指出:如果我写一个共同的主题故事、将是太容易为读者去猜测故事的结局。他也指出、读书因为每个人读那个书、看电影因为其他人看那个电影、我不希望你们成为这样的人。

呢、你真的需要写这样的故事吗?


how to be a man

This morning I read a comic book titled 'How to be a Man'. The story is about a 17 years old girl who has a lover 7 years her junior. This boyfriend of her is still an elementary school student.

The author stated: "If I write a story with common theme, it will be too easy for the readers to guess where the story goes." He also stated, "... I don't want you to become such person who reads a book because everybody read it, watch a movie because everyone else watch it..."

But, do you really need to write such story?

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    如何成为一个男人

    今天早上我读一个漫画书。这个书的名字是《如何成为一个男人》。有一个十七的女人。她比她的男朋友大七岁。她男友还是个小学生。

    作者指出:如果我写一个共同的主题故事、将是太容易读者去猜测故事的结局。他也指出、读书因为每个人读那个书、看电影因为其他人看那个电影、我不希望你们成为这样的人。
    (這整句的語意很不順,我也不是很理解,所以不知從何修改,但是他是有錯誤的)
    、你真的需要写这样的故事吗?


    how to be a man

    This morning I read a comic book titled 'How to be a Man'. The story is about a 17 years old girl who has a lover 7 years her junior. This boyfriend of her is still an elementary school student.

    The author stated: "If I write a story with common theme, it will be too easy for the readers to guess where the story goes." He also stated, "... I don't want you to become such person who reads a book because everybody read it, watch a movie because everyone else watch it..."

    But, do you really need to write such story?

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