Thinking while sitting
Sitting in front of my computer, I have been scanning the Internet over and over again from 8 o'clock on. Now I am too tired to read any articles even though they are really good and worth spending time on. It is too quiet here because every one is sleeping except me. So I can hear sounds of streets clearly such as birds' songs, rhythm of feet and so on. I close my eyes and then let my minds wander around my world, which are jailed in the "pressure prison" by myself. "Who am I? Where do I come from? Who will I leave for?"These three questions are turning around my brain like constant nightmares. But are they really important? I have asked myself time and time again but gotten nothing. Anyway, the train of our lives are still running to a mysterious future which can not be predicted by us. Why not face tomorrow with a beautiful smile? The color of life should be bright green instead of desperating dark. Good luck to you all and wish me luck
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写得不错！我在文章中的错误或是不正常的地方下面划了线，修改了一下：
你写了“So I can hear sounds of streets clearly such as birds' songs, rhythm of feet and so on. ”因该改为：“So I can hear THE sounds of streets AS clearly as birds’ songs, THE rhythm of feet, and so on.”
你写了：“I close my eyes and then let my minds wander around my world, which are jailed in the "pressure prison" by myself. ”应该改为：“I close my eyes and then let my MIND wander around my world, which IS jailed in the “pressure prison” WITHIN myself.”
你写了：“Anyway, the train of our lives are still running。。。”应该是“Anyway, the train of our lives IS still running…”
你写了：“。。。instead of desperating dark.”因该是：“。。。instead of DESPAIRINGLY dark. “
(=^･ｪ･^=) 祝万事如意！(=^･ｪ･^=)
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