Thinking while sitting
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你写了“So I can hear sounds of streets clearly such as birds' songs, rhythm of feet and so on. ”因该改为：“So I can hear THE sounds of streets AS clearly as birds’ songs, THE rhythm of feet, and so on.”
你写了：“I close my eyes and then let my minds wander around my world, which are jailed in the "pressure prison" by myself. ”应该改为：“I close my eyes and then let my MIND wander around my world, which IS jailed in the “pressure prison” WITHIN myself.”
你写了：“Anyway, the train of our lives are still running。。。”应该是“Anyway, the train of our lives IS still running…”
你写了：“。。。instead of desperating dark.”因该是：“。。。instead of DESPAIRINGLY dark. “
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