The detective story. PLEASE correct my english =)
The first chapter of this book tall about the criminal's escape and murder. Jenny Logan is a police inpector and sergaent Grant helping Jenny. The story begin at Jenny's day off. She was on the beach, when she received a telephone call. A killer escaped prison , and at one hill someone found a murdered body. Logan with Grant went at hill and they begin their investigation with the Helen's (police doctor) help.
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The detective story. PLEASE correct my english =)
The first chapter of this book tall tells about the a criminals escape and murder. Jenny Logan is a police inpector and sergaent Grant is helping Jenny. The story begins at on Jenny's day off. She was on at the beach, when she received a telephone call. A killer escaped prison , and at one hill someone found a murdered body. Logan with and Grant went at to the hill and they begin their investigation with the Helens (police doctor) help.
Good, some problems with present tense 3rd person. Also the difference between a and the.
First use a, than after use the to speak about the same thing.
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