A short paragraph about the "Taxes". Could you please correct my notes? Thank you in advance.

A short paragraph about the "Taxes". Could you please correct my notes? Thank you in advance.

Establishing the justice within a society, and treating all citizens with fairness are some of the underlying benefits to imposing different tax rates on salaries. There is not a shadow of doubt that people with high salaries should pay more taxes to the government, whereas low-income earners should pay lower taxes, and thus it is a responsibility of government to take taxes from the affluent and distribute it to the poor by providing a better living conditions for underprivileged families who are living under the poverty line in society. In this way, not only will the gap between the rich and poor people reduce, but all citizens can take advantage of welfare and well-being which are provided by government.

A short paragraph about the "Taxes". Could you please correct my notes? Thank you in advance.

Establishing the justice within a society, and treat all citizens with fairly are some of the underlying benefits to imposing different tax rates on salaries. There is not a shadow of doubt that people with high salaries should pay more taxes to the government, whereas low-income earners are supposed to should pay lower taxes, and thus this is a responsibility of government to give taxes from the affluent and distribute it to the poor by providing a better living condition for underprivileged families who are living under the poverty line in society. In this way, not only will the gap between the rich and poor people be reduced, but all citizens can take advantage of welfare and well-being which are provided by government.

[Very good.  Taxation is always a heated subject.]