Site Feedback

Bored

Hello!

Im bored, so I'm just going to write some random thing in order to get my first follower or friend..

So.. anyone interested in learning spanish and teach english?

I'm looking for someone who's up beat and fun!

Share:

 

0 comments

    Please enter between 0 and 2000 characters.

     

    Corrections

     

    Bored

    Hello!

    Im bored, so I'm just going to write some random thing in order to get my first follower or friend..

    So.. anyone interested in learning spanish and teach teaching english?

    I'm looking for someone who's up beat upbeat and fun!

     

    Hi Carin,

     

    From this short writing sample, your English seems good. It's great that you know colloquial expressions like, "I'm JUST going to..." and "upbeat." Also, you made perfect use of the verb "get," which is more commonly heard than "obtain" or "acquire," words which have similar meanings but are more formal than "get."

     

    It's nice to meet you and I hope we can help each other!

     

    --Beth

    Write a correction

    Please enter between 25 and 8000 characters.

     

    More notebook entries written in English

    Show More