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Nowadays I am studying with story books such as Cinderella and Ivan the fool.
You can guess, sentences in the books are easy and short , so they are understandable to me, but mostly not whole things.

I think, it may be my lack of grammer knowledge or the lack of understanding for mother tongues of English people.

Can you help me? Especilly english people's thougts from their culture, history and etc.

I hope our meeting in space will be good.

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    fdmaxey made some good corrections, so I'll copy his corrections here and add a few more.

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    Nowadays I am studying with story books, such as Cinderella and Ivan the Fool. 
    You can guess, sentences in the books are easy and short, so they are understandable to me, but mostly not whole things. 

    I think, it may be my lack of grammar knowledge or the lack of understanding for the mother tongue of English people. 

    Can you help me? Especilly English people's thoughts from their culture, history,and etc. 

    I hope our meeting in this space will be good.

    First notebook entry: Introducing myself

    Nowadays I am studying with story books, such as Cinderella and Ivan the fool.
    You can guess, sentences in the books are easy and short, so they are understandable to me, but mostly not whole things.

    I think, it may be my lack of grammer knowledge or the lack of understanding for mother tongue of English people.

    Can you help me? Especilly English people's thoughts from their culture, history, and etc.

    I hope our meeting in this space will be good.

     

    [Very good English.  When you use 'etc.', you separate it with a comman and don't use 'and']

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