Fdmaxey version
Network mobile
モバイルネットワーク
My younger colleague lent his network mobile to me yesterday.
昨日、若い仲間がモバイルネットワークを貸してくれました。
It's little heavy, but it's so useful for me, especially in the train for the fourteen-minute trip everyday.
少し重いのですが、とても便利で、特に毎日の14分間の電車の移動で重宝しています。
I am writing this in the train and uploading :)
私はこれを、電車の中からアップロードしています。
[I'm still learning how to use my mobile. I think I'm too old to learn]
私はまだ携帯の使い方を学んでいるよ。ちょっと年を年を取りすぎたかなって思っている。
Jeff version
Mobile Phone [Cell phone in the US]
携帯電話「アメリカではcell phoneと言います」
My younger colleague lent his mobile phone to me yesterday. It's little heavy but so useful for me especially in the daily fourteen minute train.毎日の14分の電車で I am writing this in the train and uploading... :)
Don't add a comma before conjunction such as "and", "but" etc. It is superfluous.
andやbutなどの接続詞の前にコンマを加えてはいけないよ。余分だよ。
Maia version
Network mobile
My younger colleague lent his mobile network to me yesterday. It's a little heavy, but so useful for me especially on the train for fourteen minute trips everyday. I am writing this on the train as of now and uploading it :)
