First notebook entry: Introducing myself

I am learning English, because I want to work abroad in the United Kingdom, maybea few years in Australia 
I want to make friends from the United Kingdom and Australia. 
My native language is Polish. 
I enjoy photography and traveling :)

First notebook entry: Introducing myself

I am learning English, because I want to work abroad in the United Kingdom and maybe in a few years in Australia.
I also want to make friends from the United Kingdom and Australia.
My native language is Polish.
I enjoy photography and travelling.

First notebook entry: Introducing myself

I am learning English, because I want to work abroad in the United Kingdom, maybe a few years in Australia
I want to make friends from the United Kingdom and Australia.
My native language is Polish.
I enjoy photography and traveling.

[Not bad at all.  Remember - if you list two things, use 'and' instead of a comma.  If you list three or more things, separate everything with a comma except the last two, which you separate with 'and']