First notebook entry: Introducing myself

First notebook entry: Introducing myself

I am learning ENGLISH* and JAPANESE* because I want to study abroad in TOKYO* and others countries.
MY native language is Chinese and I grew up in CHANGSHA*, CHINA*.
I enjoy listening to music and reading COMICs*. We never say "comic", always "comics".


*Don't write these words in all caps. Only the first letter needs to be capitalized for the first letter of proper nouns.

First notebook entry: Introducing myself

I am studying English and Japanese_because I want to study in Tokyo, Japan, and other countries.
MY native language is Chinese. I grew up in Changsha, China.
I enjoy listening to music and reading comics. Regards!! :D

First notebook entry: Introducing myself

i am learming ENGLISH and JAPANESE,bacause i want to study abroad in TOKYO and others country.
MY native language is chinese，and i grew up in CHANGSHA. CHINA
I enjoy listening music and COMIC,

Mostly correct, but capitialization and slight grammar tweaks.

"I am learning English and Japanese, because I want to study abroad in Tokyo, in other counties. My native language is Chinese, and I grew up in Changsha, China. I enjoy music and comics."