Hi, Im here to find friends, and to practice English speaking.

Hello there! You did very well, and there are only a few, minor mistakes

Hi, I'm here to find friends, and to practice English speaking.

Learning English language isn't an easy task to do. It needs teachers, books, and homework. However, the most effective way to study English is by practicing with other motivated English speakers.
I live in Canada now. So, the English language means everything to me; it affects study, work, and relationships.

Good luck for all !!

Those changes are not super important, and your sentences still make perfect sense without them. However, I fell that they would improve your entry. Good luck, and keep practicing! :)