Nice to meet you

Nice to meet you

Hello, it's 11 o'clock at night, I'm very glad to introduce myself to you as a new member of italki. My name is Yue Xianlong, but you can call me Eric. I'm from Yantai, Shandong province, which is a beatuful beach city. Yantai apples and cherries is are very farmous in China. I'm working in Tianjin, which is design company of from Singapore. I would like to practice my English as with an exchange partner. I can also can help you to learn Chinese when you need if you like. So would you want to exchange your languages with me? I'm looking forward to your reply.

You have great grammar! You just have to work on it a little more. ^^

Nice to meet you

Hello, it's 11 o'clock at night. I'm very glad to introduce myself to you as a new member of italki. My name is Yue Xianlong, but you can call me Eric. I'm from Yantai, Shandong province, which is a beatuful beach city. Yantai apples and cherries are very farmous in China. I'm working in Tianjin in a Singapore design company. I would like to practice my English as an exchange partner. I also can help you to learn Chinese when you need. So would you want to exchange your language with me? I am looking forward to your reply.

That was very good, especially for your 1st entry!  I think these few corrections will be very familiar to you.