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New year after married

Last year for me I got nothing.i'm too regret that I didn't went to Beijing university to learn the adult undergraduate course now I don't satisfied with my life . Everything. I hope I can make a change this year.find a good job earn lots of money have a baby learn a lot of things. I cannot waste my time . Cannot spent my time on useless things. Also help my husband change.

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    New year after being married

    Last year for me I got nothing accomplished. I'm too regret that I didn't go went to Beijing University to get my bachelor's degree. ("I regret not going to Beijing University to get my bachelor's degree" is better.) to learn the adult undergraduate course Now, I don't feel satisfied with my life, or anything else Everything. I hope I can make a change this year. I hope to find a good job, earn lots of money, have a baby, and learn a lot of things. I cannot waste my time. I cannot spend my time on useless things. also wish to help my husband change.

    Hey Tina! There were a few mistakes. Sometimes I added or changed words to clarify the meaning of the sentences.

    -Also, remember that when you list items, you need a comma to seperate them.

    Last year I accomplished nothing. I too regret that I didn't go to Beijing University to take the adult undergraduate, and course now I don't feel satisfied with my life. Everything. I hope I can make a change this year. I want to find a good job, earn lots of money, have a baby, and  learn a lot of things. I cannot waste my time . I cannot spend my time on useless things. Also want to help my husband change.

     

    By the way, I understand how you feel. Right now I am in my 3rd year of high school, but I feel that I did not do well enough my 1st or 2nd years. Now, I hope that this year and next year I can work hard to get my grades up.

    Don't give up! Always keep trying; you will reach there someday :)

    New year after married(A New Year after marriage)

    Last year for me I got nothing.  iI'm too regreting that I didn't went to attend Beijing uUniversity to learn from the adult undergraduate course, and now I don't feel satisfied with my life . Everything. I hope I can make a change this year.  fFind a good job, earn lots of money, have a baby, and learn a lot of things. I cannot waste my time. Cannot spendt my time on useless things. Also help my husband change.

     

     

    Nice Job and Good Luck!

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