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spider man, take me away.

I had lunch just now. Some relatives came to home.
I hate some men talking about politics, because what they know is almost wrong and ridiculous, blind patriotic, You can just got stupid angry and arrogant from that. The thinking of Binary opposition is the source of war emotion. It is not their fault. No one can change and explain. Who believe you? besides, people would rather to know what they want to know rather than truth for getting pride and happiness. It is reasonable. But I don’t like.
When I am in these similar horrible condition, there is a voice deeply in my heart: spider man, take me away. I am sad.
My dream is very simple, just far away from the people and environment I just can keep silence and feel embarrassed.

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    Hi Grace,


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    spider man, take me away.

    I had lunch just now. Some relatives came to my home.

    [ Some relatives came to my house for lunch just now ]


    I hate some men talking about politics, because what they know is almost always wrong and ridiculous, blindly patriotic.

     

    rule: lists are always something, something, something and something.  

    So ... move the and to the last item in the list.

    because what they know is almost always wrong, ridiculous, and blindly patriotic.

     

    You can just get to be stupid, angry and arrogant from that.

     

    The thinking of Binary opposition is the source of war emotion.

    [ Grace, I'm not at all sure what this sentence means ???]

     

    It is not their fault, no-one can change and explain. Who would believe you [anyway]? besides, people would rather to know what they want to know, rather than truth for getting pride and happiness. It issounds reasonable, but I don’t like it

    Rule: Never start a new sentence with but, use but to join sentences instead.


    When I am in these a similarly horrible condition, there is a voice deeply in my heart: "spider man, take me away. I am sad".

     

    My dream is very simple, just to be far away from the people and environment in which I can only just can keep silence and feel embarrassed.

     

     :) cheers, 祖父

     

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