My Sister
Today, she & I visited a temple in Saigon. Then, I invited her to go downtown where there are many festivals held by the government. For me, even when I'm not afraid of a crowd, I don't like to attend such celebrations because of their insecurities.
Even so, tonight, looking at my sister's smile made me feel blissful. What makes me be the happiest is that I see the ones, who I love or adore, who are so glad.
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My Sister
My sister is a busy person. She works so hard all year long. So, I seldom see that she her goes out for a drink or do something leisurely like this that.
Today, she & I we visited a temple in Saigon. Then, I and invited her to go downtown where there are many public festivals held organized by the government. For me, even when I'm not afraid of a crowds, I don't like to attend such celebrations because of my antsy nature towards having so many people around at the same time. their insecurities. Even so, tonight, just by looking at my sister's smile, it made me feel blissful. What makes me be the happiest very happy is that I to see the ones, who I love or adore, who are so glad my loved ones being so in joy.
A very loving piece :)
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