Interests
So far, fortunately, I haven't gotten bored of English. I guess this is because it is still challenging to me.
I still remember, I used to be longing to enter the college, desperately. However, after a four-month semester, I got bored of it, though I still want to go back there. In fact, I'm going to go back to the college tomorrow.
I am intrigued. I want to know if there are people like me out there.
I am interested in many different subjects, but it often doesn't last long.
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Interests
It seems that there is almost nothing which can hold my interests for long. I often get bored when it begin to become once I get familiar with them. something.
So far, fortunately, I haven't gotten am not bored of with English. I guess this is because it is still a challengeing to for me.
I still remember that I used to be longed ing desparately to enter the get into college, desperately. However, after a four-month stint, semester, I got am bored of it already. , though I still want to go back there. In fact, I'm going to go back to the college tomorrow. What you wrote can mean you quit college. Anyway, these last two sentences do not add value to your essay. You can leave them out all together.
I am intrigued. I want to know if there are people others like me out there.
I am interested in many different subjects, things but it often doesn't they don't mesmerized me last long enough. [Nothing wrong with this sentence, I just want to introduce you the word, "mesmerize"]
Interests
It seems there is almost nothing that can hold my interest for long. I often get bored when I begin to become familiar with something.
Fortunately, I haven't gotten bored with English, yet. I guess this is because it is still challenging to me.
I can still remember when I desperately used to long to enter college. However, after a four-month semester I got bored of it, though I still want to go back there. In fact, I'm going to go back to the college tomorrow.
I am intrigued. I want to know if there are people like me out there.
I am interested in many different subjects, but it often doesn't last long.
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