First notebook entry: Introducing myself

First notebook entry: Introducing myself

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Hello!_My name is Wang Zixuan, I'm a middle schllo school student.I am learning English.__My native languge is Chinese, and I grew up in China.__I enjoy drawing and playing the electronic organ.__I have an interesting comic book called "Godzilla Does Not Talk". [You must translate all foreign words into the language in which you are writing.  Not only is it a courtesy but also a required format!]  It's very interesting.It's painting illustration style is fresh.__I like it very much.

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First notebook entry: Introducing myself

Hello!My name is Wang Zixuan.I'm a middle schllo student.I am learning English.My native languge is Chinese,and I grew up in China.I enjoy drawing and playing electronic organ.I have a comic book.It's .It's very interesting.It's painting style is fresh.I like it very much.

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First notebook entry: Introducing myself

Hello! My name is Wang Zixuan. I'm a middle school student. I am learning English. My native languge is Chinese, and I grew up in China. I enjoy drawing and playing electronic organ. I have a comic book.

It's very interesting. Its painting style is fresh. I like it very much.

Note

See http://garyes.stormloader.com/its.html for the difference between it's and its.

They confuse me as well sometimes so it is an easy mistake to make while learning.

Except for the spelling mistake of school, the only other issue is that you need to leave a single space after a punctuation mark.This makes it easier to read for English readers.

Examples of such marks . , ? !

On the whole, a very good introduction for yourself.

And note that I only split the line after comic book to fit on the screen, it was not an error on your part.