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First notebook entry: Introducing myself

I am learning English,because I want to make friends from America .
My native language is Chinese,and I grew up in Tianjin China.
I enjoy badminton and basktball. On weekends i will go fishing to look for joy.

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    First notebook entry: Introducing myself

    I am learning English because I want to make friends from America.
    My native language is Chinese, and I grew up in Tianjin, China.
    I enjoy badminton and basktball. On weekends I will go fishing to look for joy.

     

    This is a very good introduction, Abe!  The second sentence would read better as follows, "I grew up in Tianjin, China and my native language is Chinese."

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