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Correct please my tale :)

I like valentine's day. Not long ago I had a site about love and romance :) I was writing articles about this sweet feeling, preparing romantic articles and I also was writing about possible romantic surprises. Over 2000 people were visiting it every day. It was interesting time.
But now i'm interested in programming and my romantic soul is put to sleep by analytic brain :)

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    Hello Tanya_K. How are you?

     

     

    Correct please my tale :)

    I like valentine's day. Not long ago I had a site about love and romance :)

    [Remove the Emoticon  please.]

     

     I was writing articles about this sweet feeling, preparing romantic articles and I also was writing about possible romantic surprises. Over 2000 people were visiting it every day. It was AN  interesting time.
    But now i'm [I'm] interested in programming and my romantic soul is put to sleep by analytic brain :) [Remove the emoticon please.   For serious communication,  you do not want to suggest to the reading public, that you are trying to be cute all the time.

    Just publish your message in clear English and leave it at that.]

     

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     It is a competent essay. Nicely done Tanya.---Warm Regards,  Bruce

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