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Are these English sentences correct?

من همیشه منتظر شنیدن صدات بودم ولی تنها چیزی که گیرم اومد ناامیدی بود
I had always been waiting for hearing your voice but the only thing I got, was disappointment

این سکوت و این تنهایی یه دلیله برای نابود کردن قلب من
This silence and loneliness are reasons for destroying my heart

By the way they are from a story.

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    Are these English sentences correct?

    من همیشه منتظر شنیدن صدات بودم ولی تنها چیزی که گیرم اومد ناامیدی بود
    I had always been waiting to hear your voice but the only thing I got, was disappointment

    این سکوت و این تنهایی یه دلیله برای نابود کردن قلب من
    This silence and loneliness are reasons to destroy my heart /These silence and lonelines are means to destroy my heart./these silence and lonliness can make my heart destroyed! :S or you can simly use " break my heart.

    By the way they are from a story.

    Are these English sentences correct?

    من همیشه منتظر شنیدن صدات بودم ولی تنها چیزی که گیرم اومد ناامیدی بود
    I had always been waiting to hear your voice but the only thing I got was disappointment

    این سکوت و این تنهایی یه دلیله برای نابود کردن قلب من
    This silence and loneliness are means to destroy my heart

    By the way they are from a story.

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