First notebook entry: Introducing myself
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First notebook entry: Introducing myself
I am just 22 years old, but I have a baby face, so almost all the people everyone thinks that I am a middle school student. It makes drives me crazy. I like travelling, and have been to many places. Last year, I went to U.S. and stayed there about 4 months. I like the life there. So I want to improve my speaking English speaking, preparing for the so I am ready to apply for a volunteer program in U.S. the next year .
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I removed "just" in the first sentence because it makes the contrast between your age and the fact you have a baby face more obvious.
"to drive someone crazy" is a common phrase in English
Be careful of how you used spaces around commas and full stops (see corrections in blue)
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