First notebook entry: Introducing myself

First notebook entry: Introducing myself

As is universally acknowledged,most of Chinese students can not use authentic English to express themselves despite of all these years of learning English. Always performing well in exams,I still have difficulty in my spoken English. Hundred sure I can say every one image speaking English well,and I think in no way except talking to people born in English speaking countries can I make it. I'd be happy if you can help me .

First notebook entry: Introducing myself

I am learning English and German. Next year I 'll will be going to Germany to study Sociology as an exchange student. My native language is Chinese. I now live in Nanjing. I like playing badminton and I really enjoy traveling. I like anything challenging. I am here to improve my spoken English. I'd appreciate it if you can help me.

Work on using conjunctions in sentences to make them flow more. It will make your sentences sound a lot better! (For example...instead of saying: "My native language is Chinese. I live in Nanjing." You can say "I live in Nanjing, and my native language is Chinese.) Good job so far. I applaud your command of the English language.

First notebook entry: Introducing myself

I am learning English and German. Next year I'll go to Germany to study Sociology
as an exchange student. My native language is Chinese and I now live in Nanjing. I like playing badminton and I really enjoy traveling. I like anything challenging. I am here to improve my spoken English. I'd appreciate it if you can help me.

This was a very good introduction, Wintan!  As you can see from the yellow correction marks, most of your errors were because you forgot to insert a space after the punctuation marks.  Contractions do not have spaces after the punctuation (I'll).

In terms of your written style, the use of "I" is much to frequent.  Rather than my giving you suggestions, could you try to write the paragraph again expressing your thoughts without using "I" so many times?