First notebook entry: Introducing myself

First notebook entry: Introducing myself

Hello everyone! My name is Zoe Qiu. I'm 13, and I'm learning English because I want to study abroad and make friends from Canada and England. (Not America?!D:<) My native language is Chinese and I grew up in China.

  Hello Zoe.  How are you?

   Let's look at your writing together, shall we?

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First notebook entry: Introducing myself

Hello,every one!My name is Zoe Qiu.

I'm 13.

I'm learning English,because I want to study abroad and make friends from Canada,  and England. My native language is Chinese,and I grew up in Chin.

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That is a most wonderful introduction, and it is encouraging to see such excellent grammar also.  You are doing very well.  I look forward to seeing   more strong communication from you. ---Warm Regards, Bruce

First notebook entry: Introducing myself

Hello every one! My name is Zoe Qiu and I'm 13. I'm learning English, because I want to study abroad and make friends from Canada and England. My native language is Chinese because  I grew up in China.

You write very well. Welcome to italki!