First notebook entry: Introducing myself

First notebook entry: Introducing myself

My name is Yang Yuguo; I am a 22 year-old man from China. My native language is Chinsese. I like reading books when I am free. Sometimes I play basketball with friends.
I have been learnning English for about ten years, but it seams that my English is still on a low level. I cannot even talk with others in English. One day, I saw the "italki" on the internet and wondered if I could find some English speaking friends.And I would like to help your Chinese. That's all about myself. Thank you.

Yang, you probably think you have made many mistakes.  Please count how many punctuation and capitalization mistakes you made; I counted 15!  These are relatively easy to correct and learn. I am sure you understand all of these points. 

I think you express yourself very well.  Keep using "italki" and I am sure you will improve quickly!

First notebook entry: Introducing myself

My name is Yang Yuguo,a 22 year-old boy. I am from china. My native language is chinese.I like reading books when i am free. Sometimes,I play basketball with my friends. I have been learning English for about ten years,but it seems that my English is still on a low level.I cannot talk with others in English.One day,I saw the italki in the internet,so I was wondering if I can find some friends who speak english and I would like to help your chinese.That's all about myself.Thank you.