First notebook entry: Introducing myself

Hey there  Wang Pan.  You certainly seem like a person who is seiously interested in practicing English.

   First, let's look at your   written message, okay?

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"First notebook entry: Introducing myself

My name is Wang Pan and I am  Chinese.

I now live in a rural community  in Jiaozuo city, Henan province.

Now I'm dropping out, but I want to study English language so now I want to find a foreign friend for Exchange.

My depression is now forgotten.

Can anyone help me?

I like to play badminton and roller skating.

 I want to talk to friends abroad.

 Want to help me?

My English is limited.

I  can only write them, which I write with a translator.

Video sharing for  works for when I just want to talk to you.

I'm not gonna lie to you. I really want to have a foreign friend."

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  Wang Pan, that is an excellent and very thorough Introduction.

You already  write rather well, and with some practice, you should make steady progress very quickly.  --Warm Regards, Bruce

My name is Wang Pan and I am Chinese. Now I live in a rural area, in Jiaozuo City, Henan province. I'm dropping out now, but I want to study English language, so now I want to find a foreign friend to Exchange (language/culture?). My depression is now forgotten, so can anyone help me?? I like to play badminton and roller skate, I want to talk to friends abroad that want to help me, because my English is limited. I can only write using a translator. We can use video sharing because I just want to talk to you, I'm not going to lie to you. I really want to have a foreign friend.

"Awesome! The begining is a little bit difficult, but keep on studying."

First notebook entry: Introducing myself

My name is Wang Pan. I am Chinese and I now live in a rural area in Jiaozuo City, Henan Province. Now I'm dropping out, but I want to study the English language, so now I want to find a foreign friend for exchange. My depression is now forgotten, can anyone help me? I like to play badminton and roller skating. I want to talk to friends abroad. Do you want to help me? My English is limited, I can only write them, which I write with a translator. We can video share for I just want to talk to you. I'm not going to lie to you. I really want to have a foreign friend.

Punctuation - Each complete thought should be a separate sentence, ending with a period (.), question mark (?) or exclamation point (!).

Capitalization - Capitalize proper nouns (names of people or places) and the first word of every sentence.

Spelling - Gonna is a slang substitute for "going to." It is not proper English and should not be used in formal writing.

Missing parts of speech - I have added parts of speech that are needed for complete, proper sentences.

First notebook entry: Introducing myself

My name is Wang Pan. I am Chinese and I now live in a rural area, in Jiaozuo City, Henan province.  Now I'm dropping out, but I want to study English language, so now I want to find a foreign friend Exchange. My depression is now forgotten, so can anyone help me??I like playing badminton and roller skating, I want to talk to friends abroad. I want to help me, because my English is limited. I can only write them, which I write with a translator. We can use video sharing, because  I just want to talk to you. I'm not going to lie to you. I really want to have a foreign friend

[Good start.  You need to shorten your sentences and work on your verbs.]