I'm so exited ^^;;;

I'm so excited ^^;;;

In a few days, I will choose the specialty that I will study at the university. I'd love to study languages. I may study English or Korean or Chinese, but people have told me that Chinese is really hard. I love to try new things so I may study it, but I care more about the Korean language because I know some words. It seems a little bit more familiar so I think I will study it. I'm so confused right now, but so excited, I hope it can be a good start for me to try a new thing and be good at it.

[Great job! Don't forget not only to capitalize your "I" and to not let your sentences run too long. You have a few spelling errors but otherwise your English is really great!]

I'm so exited ^^;;;

In a few days I will chose the specialty that I will study at the university. I'd love to study languages! I may study English, Korean or Chinese. People have told me that Chines is really hard and I love to try new things, so i may study it. However, I care more about the Korean language, because I know some words.  Because of this, it seems a little bit familiar, so I think I will study it. I'm so confused right now, but so exited! I hope it can be a good start for me to try a new thing and be good at it.

[Good piece, great enthusiasm.  Always capitalize 'I' as a pronoun and shorten your sentences, don't separate phrases with commas so often.]