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First notebook entry: Introducing myself

I am learning English, because I want to make more friends and study abroad. My native language is Chinese, and I grew up in China. I will be right here waiting for your coming, my dear friends.

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    First notebook entry: Introducing myself

    I am learning English because I want to make more friends and study abroad. My native language is Chinese and I grew up in China. I will be right here waiting for your connection, my dear friends.

     

    You did a very nice job with this short essay.  It seems you are ready to write even more next time!  I used the word "connection" in the last sentence but it could be written many different ways depending on what you want to express.  

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