Camping
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Camping
As I've said I have mentioned in my other note entries, my grandma has a farm, where she lives. My family goes there very often, almost a weekly ritual. Sometimes we camp. ( That is usually, my father, one or two cousins and me). We walk a bit (3km) about three kilometers to stay away from the farm. After all, what's the fun point of camping in the backyard? [or you can say, "where's the fun camping in the backyard"] When we arrive at Upon finding a suitable location, we seek looked for campfire wood for the campfire and maybe we a swim in a the nearby creek. I always wanted to try out those marshmallows that I see in American movies, but it's hard to find them in supermarkets :( [Are they really good?]. [I deleted them since you are asking a question aside from what you are writing in your essay. It's so-so... Just pure sugar. I don't quite like them. Too sweet for me. Some people like to put chocolate together with it.] We only spend one night, and when dawns, because nobody stays in the camp tent during the day, because it gets too hot inside. So we pack up our things and head back home...
How idyllic.
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