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Last night, my boy friens had a dream. In his dream, he saw I was bride but he is not groom. He said, he thought about memories toghether and he cried. :D. The firt time he cry.

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    :X Dreaming

    Last night, my boy friens had a dream. In his dream, he saw I was bride but he is not groom. He said, he thought about memories toghether and he cried. :D. The firt time he cry.

     

    Last night, my boyfriend had a dream. In his dream, he saw I was the bride but he was not the groom. He said he cried when he remembered the dream. (Is this what you wish to express?) This is the first time he has cried.


    This is a very touching story, Jun....  Please continue to write and you will improve very quickly!

    :X Dreaming

    Last night, my boyfriend had a dream. In his dream, he saw I was bride but he was not groom. He said, he thought about memories together and he cried.lt was The firt time he cry.

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