Desperate Housewives(3)

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Desperate Housewives(3)
Bree is the perfect housewife of this drama. You will never see her with anything less than perfect hair. She is known for her cooking, making her own clothes, and doing her gardening, etc. Everyone on Wisteria Lane appreciates her talents. But things did not go very well, her husband cheated on her and her gay son was very rebellious. She was addicted to alcohol at one point. Drowning her sorrows in alcohol only made it worse. But fortunately, by virtue of her strong will and friends' help, she changed a lot and overcame obstacles, also retrieving her son's honour and support. Her experience tells us some philosophy that a person without faults will never be found and what doesn't kill you makes you stronger.
Really excellent work!! So impressive! I love that you used phrases like "drowning her sorrows" (this always means alcohol, you don't have to say it), "overcoming obstacles," "appreciates her talents," and "what doesn't kill you makes you stronger." Your English is very rich and beautiful.
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