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My friend's wedding reception.

Today, I went to my friend's wedding reception.
It's really emotive corner that bride told feeling of her thank to her mother.
It was so brilliant reception.

今日は私の友人の結婚式がありました。
花嫁が花嫁の母親へ今までの感謝の気持ちを伝えるコーナーではとても感動しました。
とても素敵な式でした。

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    My friend's wedding reception.

    Today, I went to my friend's wedding reception.
    It was really an emotional moment when bride told of her feelings of thanks to her mother.
    It was quite a brilliant reception.

    今日は私の友人の結婚式がありました。
    花嫁が花嫁の母親へ今までの感謝の気持ちを伝えるコーナーではとても感動しました。
    とても素敵な式でした。

     

    [Sounds like fun.  I always liked wedding receptions.  I changed the order of a few phrases to make them sound more natural.  You must keep the same tense for the whole sentence ('It was really' instead of 'It's really')]

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