A Taylor-Swift Song
They share nothing in common but making her feel like a fool
They said she was a good girl but just not wanted any more
The first time she went to a strange city for him
Only to find he had got married across the sea
The second time she wanted nothing but a company
Only to find this time he had taken her seriously while she was just lonely
But thank God his mother was determined to break them up completely
Simply because she is neither Shanghainese nor Paris Hilton
The third time she saw it differently
As it was actually different from previous two in many ways
She pictured herself Juliet
Only to find her Romio running away with a chick
He said "Goodbye, Miss Idealist"
"True love is just for a few, if it really exists"
She said "Goodbye, Miss I-CAN"
"You have tried too hard and deserve a rest"
"Love is not like good marks in an exam that you can get by working hard"
"A perfect girlfriend is not necessarily rewarded with a happy ending"
"So you might as well be a stupid woman waiting for the rescue of your Superman"
"For the brave little mermaid was reincarnated as froth in the sea "
"But the Snow White just had a long dream before she was found by him"
"Hopefully this time you won't be hurt too bad."
Corrections
叫咱爷 How are you?
It was a bold effort to undertake the analysis of a song.
You've done a good job of trying to assess the basis of the lyrics, based upon the information available to you.
Also, you introduced some very humorous remarks into your analysis, which I thought very successful [The Shanghai Mother...etc.]
You have a great talent for outlining your notes, and I think that you should give yourself both the time and patience necessary to develop your writing talent and composition generally.
I will very much look forward to see your next effort.
[I wish I could say your name, but......]
Give yourself much credit, both for undertaking a complicated subject, and for addressing the distinct issues to the best of your ability. Nicely done.---Warm Regards, Bruce
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The second time she wanted nothing but a company.
This says she is after his ... corporation.
The second time she wanted nothing but company.
Simply because she was neither Shanghainese nor Paris Hilton.
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She pictured herself as Juliet
Only to find her Romeo running away with a chick
["some chick" or "someone else" or "another woman" reads better].
...
"But theSnow White just had a long dream before she was found by him".
...
"Hopefully this time you won't be hurt too badly."
Very proficient, as always.
:)
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