About myself
Now I tell you about myself! I live in Cheluabinsk! New here fell a meteorit! I think you know!
I played mini-football from 2000. After in 2008 I was a football referee. It is very intresting and very difficalt work! But for me it is hobby, it is my style life!
I hope you help me and I will speak to English very-very well!

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Hello Veron:
You are doing a great job. I read about the meteor explosion, and saw some videos about it. That is incredible.
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About myself
Hello! My name is Vera! I am beginning to study English now. Before I think that English is not for me! But now I understand that I want to speak English very, very well! Because i started to study! I'm 23 yers old, and for me it is shameful to not learn the English language! I have many mistakes! [but that is okay Vera!]
Now I will tell you about myself! I live in Cheluabinsk! The News here is that a meteorite fell! I think you know!
I played mini-football from 2000. Afterwards, in 2008 I was a football referee. It is very intresting and very difficult work! But for me it is a hobby, it is my lifestyle!
I hope you help me and I will speak to English very-very well!
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Certainly Vera, this is a great introduction. You are doing very well already.
----Warm Regards, Bruce
About myself
Hello! My name is Vera! I have begun to study English now. Before, I thought that English was not for me! However, now I feel that I want to speak English very, very well! This is because I have now started to study! I'm 23 years old, which for me is a very shameful age not to be able to speak the English language by! I write don't have translate because I find it hard to translate by writing as I have make many mistakes!
Now I shall tell you about myself! I live in Cheluabinsk! Near to here is where a meteorite fell, which I think you would know!
I played mini-football from 2000. After that, in 2008, I became a football referee. It is very intresting and very difficalt difficult work! But for me it is a hobby; it is my style lifestyle!
I hope you can help me and that I will come to speak to English very, very well!
Great first effort - good luck with your goal!
;-)
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