黑水鸡 Oct 07, 2010 在池塘上，我看到一对黑水鸡游泳在一起，它们是亲的和雏的。然后，它们在草丛里走在一起，为了找食物。 雏鸟是刚才出生在春天的，所以已经成长了，不过额头还黄色的。成鸟的额头红色的。 Common Moorhen Gallinula chloropus I found a pair of Moorhens, a parent and its young bird, sa

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黑水鸡 Oct 07, 2010 在池塘上，我看到一对黑水鸡游泳在一起，它们是亲的和雏的。然后，它们在草丛里走在一起，为了找食物。雏鸟是刚才出生在春天的，所以已经成长了，不过额头还黄色的。成鸟的额头红色的。 Common Moorhen Gallinula chloropus I found a pair of Moorhens, a parent and its young bird, sailing together on the pond. After a while, they landed on the meadow and walked along together to search their foods. The young one was born in this spring, so it has already grown up enough but the forehead was yellow yet, although the adult's forehead is red.

Oct 7, 2010 11:06 AM

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黑水鸡(红松鸡) Oct 07, 2010

<strike>在池塘上，</strike>我看到一对黑水鸡<strike>游泳一起</strike>在池塘里一起游泳，<strike>它们是亲的和雏的</strike>是母亲和它的孩子。<strike>然后</strike>后来，它们上岸了，一起到草丛里寻找食物<strike>在草丛里走在一起，为了找食物。</strike>
雏鸟是<strike>刚才出生在</strike>这个春天出生的，所以如今已经<strike>成长</strike>长大了，不过额头还黄色的，而成鸟的额头则是红色的。

Gallinula chloropus
I found a pair of Moorhens, a parent and its young bird, sailing together on the pond. After a while, they landed on the meadow and walked along together to search their foods.
The young one was born in this spring, so it has already grown up enough but the forehead was yellow yet, although the adult's forehead is red.

October 8, 2010

我看到一對黑水雞在池塘裡一起划水(，盪過池面)。

(細看，)它們是親鳥和雛鳥。

不一會兒，它們上了岸，在草叢裡比身走動覓食。

雛鳥出生於春天，如今已經長大了，不過額頭還是黃色的。

而成鳥(的額頭) 是紅色的。

物浮於水面前進 (sail) 不用游泳而用划水撥水

如鴨子划水紅掌撥清波或如盪舟

To walk along together 比肩(身)而行

漢語第三人稱代名詞本無性別之分西風東漸後始有

他 (陽性) 她(陰性) 它(無生物) 牠(有生物) 祂(神格) 之分

這裡若跟隨西化用語它則改用牠

用轉折語氣的連接詞而來表示對比同時貫通語氣

(的額頭) 不會造成文意混淆的對比再次出現時可以省略

October 8, 2010

黑水鸡 Oct 07, 2010

我看到池塘里有两只黑水鸡在游泳，它们是一只亲鸟和一只雏鸟。后来，它们上岸了，走进草丛寻找食物。
雏鸟出生在春天，所以已经长大，只不过额头还是黄色的。成鸟的额头则是红色的。

October 7, 2010

黑水鸡 Oct 07, 2010

在池塘上，我看到一对黑水鸡在一起游泳<strike>在一起</strike>，它们是亲<strike>的</strike>鸟和雏<strike>的</strike>鸟。然后，它们在草丛里一起走<strike>在一起</strike>，为了找食物。
雏鸟是<strike>刚</strike><strike>才</strike>出生在春天的，所以已经<strike>成</strike>长大了，不过额头还是黄色的。成鸟的额头是红色的。

Common Moorhen
Gallinula chloropus
I found a pair of Moorhens, a parent and its young bird, sailing together on the pond. After a while, they landed on the meadow and walked along together to search their foods.
The young one was born in this spring, so it has already grown up enough but the forehead was yellow yet, although the adult's forehead is red.

October 7, 2010

黑水鸡 Oct 07, 2010

在池塘<strike>上</strike> 边，我看到一对黑水鸡夫妇和它们的子女在一起游泳<strike>，它们是亲的和雏的</strike>。<strike>然后，</strike>它们在草丛里一边走<strike>在一起，为了</strike>一边找食物。
雏鸟是<strike>刚才</strike>出生在春天的，所以已经成长了，不过额头还是黄色的。一般成鸟的额头红色的。

October 7, 2010

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