First notebook entry: Introducing myself

First notebook entry: Introducing myself

Hello everyone! I am a newcomer. My name is Eros. I want to learn English and improve it, so I hope everyone can help me. Also I like to make friends. You are welcome to find me. Thank you!

First notebook entry: Introducing myself

Hello everyone! I am a newcomer; my name is Eros.I want to learn and improve English it, so I hope everyone can help me. Also, I like to make friends. Welcome to find me; thank you! 

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