Meeting an old friend
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Hello Jesse:
Meeting an old friend
I went downtown to visit a friend of mine that I hadn't contacted for years last Friday. We had a chat, and she's not the person I used to know anymore.
Her appearance, character, hobby, and everything about her is strange to me now. What surprised me most is that she has changed into a lesbian, she plays a straight role in the relationship. I wish her happiness although I can't accept that kind of relationship. but look on the positive side, I finally got a lesbian friend.
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That's a good brief essay Jesse. Remember to capitalize the "I".
Keep writing. You are doing rather well.---Warm Regards, Bruce
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