I Need More Pratice

I Need More Pratice

Yesterday, I found this interesting and amazing website where I can improve my English at home.
In order to polish my writing , I will come here regularly and express my thoughts and feelings here.
I am a college student,and I will be graduating this July, this year.Before finding myself a proper job , I want to first improve my English level first, so here I am.

First , let me introduce myself briefly. I am an anverage college student and I am an optimistic person. I love different cultures,and I like watching movies,restoring a Rubik's cube,playing badminton, and chatting with my friends,etc,.There are a lot of things I wanted to learn for example, swimming and playing piano. Learning how to play the  piano is always my dream, however, I don't have the opportunity to learn it. I have been learning English for many many years, and I feel that I am not so bad when it comes to listening comprehension and my command of vocabulary. But I don't have many chances to use the English language, so I get nervous when I have to speak in English. I am weak at oral English and writing. I hope that I could find someone to who would be my language partner. 

I need to get up early tomorrow, so I couldn't write a longer essay here today because writing in English is really time-consuming for me.

It has been a long time since the last time I wrote an essay in English.

I would be grateful if you could spend some time and correct my mistakes.

Corrections: 1. Please be a little conscious on your spelling you mispelled the following words : introduce, optimistic, partner, writing and essay. 

2. When you are enumerating several items place the word "and" on the last item for example: I love different cultures,and I like watching movies,restoring a Rubik's cube,playing badminton, and chatting with my friends,etc,.

3. I suggest that you brush up on your subject -verb agreement. (English Grammar)

Hello chacha, Here are some corrections that I made on your notebook entry, I hope I was able to help. Have a great day.  

I Need More Pratice

Yesterday, I found this interesting and amazing website where I can improve my English at home.
In order to polish my writing , I will come here regularly and express my thoughts and feelings here.
I am a college student,and I will graduate in July, this year.Before finding myself a proper job , I want to first improve my English level, so here I am.

First , let me intruduce myself briefly. I am an average college student and I am an optimistic person.I love different cultures,   and I like watching movies,

restoring a Rubik's cube,playing badminton,chatting with my friends,  etc,.

There are a lot of things I want to learn. For example, swimming,

playing piano.Learning how to play a piano is always my dream, however, I don't have the opportunity to learn it.I have learned English for many many years, and I feel not so bad when it comes to listening comprehension and my command of vocabulary. But I don't have many chances to use English, so I get nervous when I have to speak in English. I am weak at oral English and wrtting.I hope that I could find someone to be my language parter.


I need to get up early tomorrow, so I couldn't write a longer eassy here today because writing in English is really time-consuming for me.

It has been a long time since the last time I wrote an essay in English.

I would be grateful if you could spend some time and correct my mistakes.