First notebook entry: Introducing myself
My native language is Spanish.
I have several hobbies.
I like playing chess.
I enjoy cooking.
I love reading.
I like dancing salsa.
I like listening music.
But my favourite hobbies is to paint.
I have many pictures in my home and I've paintend all of them.
There is one that is very special to me.
It is a picture of a pet my dog.
She died eight years ago.
The picture is great one meter by one meter.
It has a dark background.
She's sitting on an armachair in the living room.
She has white curly hair and very expresive eyes.
She's wearing a red collar with her name.
The picture is in my daugher's room.
Her name was Cuki
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First notebook entry: Introducing myself
Hi, my name is Juana; I am learning English.
My native language is Spanish.
I have several hobbies.
I like playing chess.
I enjoy cooking.
I love reading.
I like dancing salsa dancing.
I like listening to music.
But my favourite hobbies hobby is to paint.
I have many pictures in my home and I've paintend painted all of them.
There is one that is very special to me.
It is a picture of a pet my pet dog.
She died eight years ago.
The picture is great large: one meter by one meter.
It has a dark background.
She's sitting on an armachair in the living room.
She has white curly hair and very expressive eyes.
She's wearing a red collar with her name on it.
The picture is in my daugher's room.
Her name was Cuki
- Great piece. One word of caution with the word 'great': Your usage was not altogether incorrect. However, you would probably have to write 'the picture is a great size'
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