Introducing myself 自我介绍
我想学中文。
当我访问了一些国家,我觉得中国在很多国家有很大很大的影响。
特别是东亚和东南亚地区。
我喜欢看上网和听音乐。
我喜欢跑步。
我是一名软件工程师,工作了9年。
I live in Tokyo, Japan.
I want to learn Chinese.
When I visited some countries, I feel that Chinese have great a great influence in many countries.
Especially east and south east asia.
I like to watch the Internet and listen music.
I like running.
I am a Software Engineer for 9 years.
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Introducing myself 自我介绍
我住在东京,日本。 (世界では一つの東京だと思いますだけね。日本を言わなくても分かりますよ。^^)
我想学中文。
当我访问了一些国家(以後),我觉得中国在很多国家有很大很大的影响。
特别是东亚和东南亚地区。
我喜欢看上网和听音乐。
我喜欢跑步。
我是一名软件工程师,工作了9年。(也可以说成:工作9年了)
I live in Tokyo, Japan.
I want to learn Chinese.
When I visited some countries, I feel that Chinese have great a great influence in many countries.
Especially east and south east asia.
I like to watch the Internet and listen music.
I like running.
I am a Software Engineer for 9 years.
Introducing myself 自我介绍
我住在日本东京,日本。
我想学中文。
当我访问了一些国家,我觉得中国在很多国家都有很大很大的影响。
特别是东亚和东南亚地区。
我喜欢看上网和听音乐。
我喜欢跑步。
我是一名软件工程师,工作了9年。
I live in Tokyo, Japan.
I want to learn Chinese.
When I visited some countries, I feel that Chinese have great a great influence in many countries.
Especially east and south east asia.
I like to watch the Internet and listen music.
I like running.
I am a Software Engineer for 9 years.
在汉语中,我们先说国家然后说城市。
Introducing myself 自我介绍
我住在东京,日本。
我想学中文。
当我访问了一些国家后,我觉得中国在很多国家有很大很大的影响。
特别是东亚和东南亚地区。
我喜欢看(上网 can’t use 看。"上"and"看"are both verbs)上网和听音乐。
我喜欢跑步。
我是一名软件工程师,工作了9年。
I live in Tokyo, Japan.
I want to learn Chinese.
When I visited some countries, I feel that Chinese have great a great influence in many countries.
Especially east and south east asia.
I like to watch the Internet and listen music.
I like running.
I am a Software Engineer for 9 years.
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