Un portrait de ma famille

Hi, i noticed some mistake in your family portrait

You say "Ma famille a 4 membres", it's pretty correct, but it's better to say " Nous sommes 4 dans ma famille" = We're four in my family or, "Ma famille est constituée de 4 personnes " = My family is composed of 4 people :)

Then, you said " tout le monde dans ma famille est COURTE" ! I think you wanted to say everybody are small right? So you have to say "petit" instead of "courte"!

"Aussi, mon choit (il a 2 ans) a les fourrures blondes", it's not fluent, it's better to say " J'ai aussi un chiot de 2 ans à la fourrure blonde" .

"Mon chiot s'appelle MINE parce qu'elle est mon chiot!!" This is funny haha! You don't have to repeat twice "mon chiot", just say "Mon chiot s'appelle MINE parce qu'elle est à moi" = " My puppy is called MINE because... she's mine"

"  Ils vont a universite McGill et doivent finir leurs devoirs difficiles" = You just forget the " l' " = Ils vont à L'université , and instead of "devoirs", say " études" :)

"Mon chiot est tres ridicule et heureux", my puppys are too haha ! In french there is an expression to say "ridiculous and happy", it's "imbécile heureux" , so you can say "Mon chiot est un imbécile heureux" = My puppy is a blissful idiot !

Don't forget to mention that your puppy is a female!

That's it ! Do not worry, your text was understandable ;)

Aurevoir !
( Sorry for my english... i'm French :) Hope it was helpful ! )